"It's no secret that a conscience can sometimes be a pest It's no secret ambition bites the nails of success Every artist is a cannibal every poet is a thief All kill their inspiration and sing about the grief"
Your work here is charming. The apparent distance between subject and viewer is a bit closer than conversational. There is a certain feeling of intimacy you have achieved in the expression the girl directs at the viewer. Furthermore, you have achieved something which all artists should hope to master. I am speaking of implied motion. Of course, I am looking, in truth, at a two dimensional representation of a moment. I can, however perceive the journey of the girl's hand through her hair as well as the breeze brushing against her face. Congratulations. You have a gift and I look forward to seeing you further mature in your craft.